Some people believe that exploring outer space is important. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money.
Even though people think that space exploration may be a wasted money, it is very important to emphasize the importance that exploring outer space can bring us.
Companies like NASA have made huge contribution to technology growth when it sent the first 3 men to the moon. Ever since, they had to start studying how the human body would react in an environment out of gravity. New technologies started to grow. For example, radio and TV showed up.
Futhermore, we can find out the existance of lives in other planets and even we can have a better understanding of our own lives by exploring outer space. It is somehow important to know the possibility of living in another planet because maybe in the future we will not be able to live in our mother planet.
However, there are some issues regarding to the people's safety. For instance, companies invest thousands of dollars but the mission fails and people may die. But companies have its brilliant minds and this may certainly be difficult to happen.
Finally, exploring outer space is really important and it can bring us lots of benefits.
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- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 33
- Some people believe that exploring outer space is important. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money. 55
- It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 189.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80423280423 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62495725769 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3856751102 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259997803824 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864178553497 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118348688502 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154698609209 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130567799109 0.0609392437508 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.