The ability to maintain friendships for a long period is more important than making new friends in order to be happy.
All individuals are getting involved in the relationships through their lives. In this regard, while some people hold on this view that they should keep their old friendships anyway, others believe that making new friends is required. As far as I am concerned, making new friends is necessary for all people because not only could they learn many new points of view, but they also have more fun in their lives. In the following, I will elaborate on my reasons.
First and foremost, having a lot of new friends make us happier because it let us look at life through other perspectives. For more clarification, by hanging out with the friends whom we know them for a long time, individuals would have the same point of view as before. On the other hand, because of meeting new different friends, people can be familiar with others' opinions which may induce them to modify their viewpoints. Take my personal experience as an example. I remember when I was graduated from a bachelor degree and had two friends whom I was with them all the times. The life was monotone for me due to having the same fun and people. After accepting to master degree, I moved to another city, and, as a result, I had to make new friends. Having had new people, I could enjoy many new works which I did not attend before. I, also, recognized my real hobbies and perspectives that intrigue me to live differently with more pleasure. In fact, had I not changed my friendship, I would not have tried different occasions and understood my personality.
Last but not least, people will have more fun with people who have more common interests which cause them to find more friends. To say that, if people join new clubs and groups, they will make new friendships with whom are more similar to them. In this case, they will have more fun with them as the result of their identical hobbies. An example can drive this notion to home, a person who has a friend since her elementary school, who is loyal and knows her very well, has some different hobbies, and, accordingly, make them do these hobbies separately. In the case of having friends who like those hobbies, they will enjoy more and can discuss them. Maybe there is not same as us, but by having various friends, she can participate in different activities which they like. Although old friends should not be abandoned, finding new friends let us engage in more activities in common.
All in all, by taking all the reasons and examples mentioned before into consideration, people should make new friends in order to be happier and enhance their point of view. As a matter of fact, they will look at the world as the others' dimension, and experience many new hobbies that they could not attend them without having their new friendships. To put it another way, who can ignore the influence of others on a person' life?
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| 2019-01-10 | Azadehyousefi | 73 | view |
- Because modern life is complex, it is essential for young people to plan 70
- n the past it was easier to find a job or career would lead to a secure successful future 87
- people should know about the news. 73
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking websites. 73
- busy parents should have fun playing games and sports. others believe that they should do things together that are related to schoolwork. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, anyway, but, first, if, look, may, so, well, while, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65805168986 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51025193429 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461232604374 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2218841361 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223724335333 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709946851995 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589254367815 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153967278427 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181165906463 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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