Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults. Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? What can be done about this problem?
The participation of adults in sports has reduced dramatically in a few decades. Numerous people stopped being involved in sports in their adulthood while they were participating in games at the younger age. This essay will discuss the reasons for a stop in physical activities by adults and also discuss about some ways forward to overcome this problem.
There are several reasons why many adults stop doing physical exercise. To begin with, the imbalance in work and life is a major hindrance which stops people to involve in games. They have great work pressure and additional responsibilities which makes their schedule very busy, thus, due to lack of time, they are unable to perform any physical work. For instance, according to a recent survey of the Ministry of Health and Safety, 85 % of employees are overburdened and do not have enough time to dedicate towards their health. In addition, people become lethargic with the progression of age and sedentary lifestyle. The advancement in technology has made things easier for people. They have several machines to perform their daily chores which leads them a luxurious and comfortable life. Consequently, they become lazy and these things stop them to do physical activities.
This problem can be resolved by taking some measures immediately. First of all, people should have a well-defined routine which must be followed consistently to avoid irregularities. There must be a time slot allocated to physical activity such as running, exercise and sports. This will lead to a healthy and comfortable life without any health issue. Moreover, there should be an implementation of strict policies under labour act by the government such as a fixed number of working hours per week and clearly defined job roles which will definitely reduce the workload of employees. For example, the Canadian government implemented the strict policies for employers and employees in which working hours and wages are strictly monitored. Therefore, people and government both should make efforts to overcome this kind of problem which is pernicious for the society.
To conclude, physical work is extremely important to maintain good health. The work-life imbalance and laziness of people are the obstacles for them, due to which they skip physical work in their adulthood. Hence, this problem could be figure out by following a routine which has a dedicated slot for physical activity and implementation of strict policies by the government such as fixed working hours and wages.
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- Nowadays people try to balance their work with other things in life but only some could actually achieve it so far What are the reasons for that How can we solve this problem 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such as fixed working hours and wages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26302729529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84783332407 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521091811414 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5678253548 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287682471024 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926386090749 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856714307988 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183418922793 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804940068918 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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