A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer
The author recommends a uniform curriculum for all the students of a country. Whether the author's recommendation would be fruitful or not will highly depend on the host country. For instance, in a diverse country like India encompassing a vast number of languages, dialects and religions, the recommendations contended by the author would be highly restrictive; it would fail to account for the inherent diversity that makes almost each state in that country unique. Be that as it may, another issue to be pointed out is the inherent problem of choosing the correct curriculum. Reiterating the example of India, the enforcement of a single curriculum might at best cause unease amongst citizens and at worst, outright anarchy amongst the underrepresented minority. We must also take into account the concept of "home-schooling", where a child may be taught only the syllabus that his/her teacher deem important. The enforcement of a uniform curriculum would almost be anathema to the concept of home schooling. On the other hand, one must also take into account the various advantages that the national curriculum might provide. A uniform standard of evaluation of the students would make for a smoother college selection process. It might also help improve the pedagogue of certain backward areas by setting down uniform guidelines to help the teachers and students alike. Consequently, it would help improve the overall quality of education received by the students. Thus, the concerned authorities should take a balanced approach towards the execution of the idea. It would be pragmatic to conduct a poll/survey of the stakeholders vis-a-vis the students,teachers and other members of staff. Using the data of this survey, the authorities should decide if a uniform national curriculum is would be beneficial or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... the students of a country. Whether the authors recommendation would be fruitful or not...
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Line 1, column 1668, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , teachers
... the stakeholders vis-a-vis the students,teachers and other members of staff. Using the d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30502300799 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7513679204 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095259123213 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395183302005 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442359051361 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095259123213 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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