Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce not the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">It is considered by many people that industries and individuals ought to be responsible for the pollution created by them instead of the government. In my opinion, not only the industry and the individual person but also the government should work combinedly to mitigate the pollution from the environment. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">On one hand, the most of the people believe that industries and individuals should take effort to clean the garbage from the area where they reside. Industries can take some preventive measures before emitting gases and chemicals into the environment. In other words, they can use filter in their chimneys and pipes, so that the emission of CO2 and chemicals should be in a safe limit. Individual people can also be conscious to put the garbage in a right place. For instance, they should not mix up the wet litters with the dry one. Moreover, they can pay a considerable amount of money to the municipality to clean the area. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">On the other hand, I believe thegovernment is equally responsible to make the environment pollution free. Firstly, they can clean the lakes, rivers of the industrial area as well as filter waste products from it. In addition, they can utilize this rubbish to
make bio-gases which they can supply to the industry for their fuel. Secondly, they can initiate some eco-friendly measures to recycle the litters from our surrounding environment. For example, recently the Indian government had installed different colours of trash-bins for different types of waste materials which is an applauding strategy. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">In conclusion, it would not be possible for an individual or an industry to clean up the rubbish from the environment without the involvement of the government. Therefore, to make the environment pollution free the government as well as the individual and the
industry should work together.</span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 7.10158730159 5.12529762239 139% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.91467687832 2.80592935109 318% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48253968254 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6390232044 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.133333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109473374992 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633907353784 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337565429561 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813600116788 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224317197738 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.32 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.9 12.4159519038 192% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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