all children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they starts school, until they begin university
I, to a great extent, agree with idea that learning a foreign language such as English, French, and etc is very useful and can be a vital factor in progress of students.
First and foremost, learning new language increase the confidence of the student and causes students in today’s vital world shows better yourself. Nowadays, communication between societies gradually enhance and each country’s people which make an effective relationship with other people, countries develop in all aspect industrial, cultural and others expeditiously. For example, according to the geography condition of Switzerland, children learn four live languages in schools. for this reason, Switzerland people are one the disciplined and charismatic people in the world.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that, learning diverse language from childhood expand the vision of students. Also, it is noted that keeping language information in mind is very better and effective in childhood. Most of the children that have complete relation with another foreign language, usually in the choice of their ways in the future performs consciously. For instance, students which have strong background in the other language choose the best job in the future because of the different information which obtains from the websites and communication with other people in others world.
Finally yet importantly, learning a foreign language prepare a suitable opportunity for children in the educational future. As we know, most of the universities in the world are taught with unique language such as English. For example, Asian people which desire to study in the best universities in Europe or America should have sufficient dominance in English.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that all children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school because of learning a new language increases the confidence of the students, expands the vision of children and prepare an appropriate chance for children.
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in on specific subject 61
- some people say that the internet provides a lot of valuable information, others think access to much information creates problems 73
- successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well 76
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. 71
- It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: Finally,
...ion with other people in others world. Finally yet importantly, learning a foreign lan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are an appropriate chance for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47975077882 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94983171843 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5210552306 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277289646264 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902306210161 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11585137493 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171025307665 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154683545438 0.0645574589148 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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