[Pie chart]* World Spending : Food(24%); Housing (12%); Transport (18%), Other(40%)* World Population: Europe (14%); Americas (14%); Africa (10%), Asia (57%), Other (5%)* Consumption of resources: USA& Europe (60%); Other (40%)

Essay topics:

[Pie chart]
* World Spending : Food(24%); Housing (12%); Transport (18%), Other(40%)
* World Population: Europe (14%); Americas (14%); Africa (10%), Asia (57%), Other (5%)
* Consumption of resources: USA& Europe (60%); Other (40%)

The first pie chart shows the proportion of the spending of the world on food, clothing, housing, transport, etc. The second one shows the percentage of the population of continents in the world. The last one shows the level of using resources in per cent. Generally speaking, the consumption of the USA and Europe was highest with 60%, although the population of Asia made up the largest percentage than the total population of the USA and Europe.
As you can see that, in the first pie chart, the consumption in food is the biggest which compared with other resources (24%), while people all over the world spend less money on clothing, which was 6%. Housing and transport are the next major expenses at 12% and 18% respectively.
In the second chart, fifty-seven per cent of the population consists of Asia. Europe and USA have the same population with 14%, while Africa accounts for 10% of the population.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79617834395 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61517524218 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2835708756 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317470745301 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115935658948 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068899035582 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195920023052 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252385912207 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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The below pie charts describes the picture of resources consumption and spent by the countries of the world and distribution of population for them.Overall,most of the resources spent on food with 40% and other categories are with small amounts they are clothing,housing and transport accounted with 18%. Moreover ,transport is the highest factor after food by
18%.Finally,the mostly used figures for resources is others accounted with 40%.

On the other hand,the most distributed Population country is Asia with 57%,Following with Europe along with America are constant population by 14%.However,the remaining countries are with small rate of population,Africa by 10% along with Others by 5%.

Finally,Resources Consumption for countries is categorized by two.The most used countries are USA and Europe with same percentage i.e; 60% while the resources used for others is accounted by 40%