Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Introduce yourself, explain what the problem is
and suggest solutions to the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concerns over noise pollution being created by the renovation works at the library. I am a resident of HSR Housing Society which is next to the library.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. I am delighted that the council has decided to renovate the community library. However, machinery being used for the renovation is quite old and runs on fuel. These fuel based machines produce a lot of noise and disturb people living in the surrounding areas. My residence is next to the library and the impact of the noise is very high.
I would like to recommend the use of modern electronic equipment instead of fuel based machinery. Electronic machinery does not produce much noise and the decibel levels are very low. So the disturbance to the families staying close to the library can be averted.
I look forward to seeing this problem fixed.
Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84431137725 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53660497581 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7095225734 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2307692308 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157591892213 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463184726347 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379372224186 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826918872847 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166080879624 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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