Some people prefer to eat at food stand or restaurants. other prefer to prefer and eat food at home. which do you prefer?
Although some people perfer to eat foot at restaurants because it is faster, I prefer to cook food at home. both ways of eating have its advantages, but I think that cooking in home has more beneficial effects for people. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First, its cheaper to cook food in house. buying and eating foot at restaurants course more payment for people. Restaurant always add their cots, their employees salary nad their profits on the bill, which cause you to pay more. But if you make food at your home, you do not have to pay for these thing and as a result you could save more money. For example, about years age, I started working for a big computer company in one of the biggest city in our county. My family lived county sides and far away from my office. So I lived alone in a small and quiet apartment. At first, most of the time I went to a restaurant near my home and ate my dinner there. The money I paied for one dinner was not very expensive at all, so I thought that it was not a problem for me. At the end of the month, when I calculated my incomes and my payments, I realized that in all I costed more that half of my incomes on my dinner, which was a huge amount of money for me. After that, I decided to cook my dinner in my house instead of eating outside. The result was amazing and thanks to cooking in house, I saved lots of money. So according to my personal experience, I prefer to eat at home rather that going out.
Second, cooking food at home is way too healthier for people. you are not sure what products restaurants use for their meals and if they are fresh and clean of pollution or not. But when you cook at home, you will use the material that you have bought and, you could cook your food in a way that you think its healthier. For example, my brother works as a civil engineering in a famous factory and earns lots of money. He is so busy and he does not have enough time for cooking, so he always orders food for himself and the money is not a big deal for him at all. Recently, when he went to a doctor for a check-up, the doctor told him that his heart is in a dangerous situation and a layer of fat has covered all of it. And if he does not stop eating food from restaurant, he would face with bigger problem in his health. Immediately, he stopped ordering food from restaurant and he start to eat healthy food, which he made in his house. After a month, he went for another check-up and his health situation had improved well. That is why I think eating food at home has valuable effects on our body.
In sum, personally I prefer to eat foot at home because it is cheaper and more healthier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... foot at home because it is cheaper and more healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, i feel, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17274472169 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25549310857 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445297504798 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8206666465 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5185185185 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2962962963 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298958191626 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968111265878 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113128599829 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247026645889 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641844941784 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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