The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
In the given bar chart, the export trade of Scotland to the rest of the UK and to the rest of world in 2014 can be observed, which is being measured in pounds.
The overall export of Scotland to rest of the world was greater than the export to the rest of the UK, except in Electrical and Instrument Engineering domain. The export of Scotland to UK was greater than the rest of the world only in Electrical and Instruments Engineering.
Analyzing the bars, it can be seen that Business Services and Finance export category is contributing 13.8 billion pounds to rest of the world. The exports of Scotland to the UK maxed out at 5 billion pounds in the Chemicals and Mineral products division. The minimum export to the rest of the world was in Agriculture, Forestry and Mining group, being a mere 2.4 billion pounds, whereas the lowest export contribution to rest of UK was 0.6 billion pounds, observed in the same domain.
In conclusion, Scotland’s export to rest of UK is overshadowed by its exports to rest of the world.
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- The bar chart below shows Scotland s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68306010929 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75965481641 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431693989071 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.927996418 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344751232748 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212599674832 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922262092182 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274036571124 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665504425286 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.