Which would you choose: a high-paying job that you didn’t enjoy, or a lower-paying job that you did enjoy? Explain your reasoning, using specific reasons and examples.
There are many features of a job that employees should consider. A job with high salary could be so appealing but in my opinion, I strongly believe that people should do the job that they love according to following reasons.
In the first place, when people do the job they love, they could enjoy every hour at work and have a happier life. Without passion, employees would have to force themselves to meet the work requirements, which is increasingly rigorous, especially in high salary work. After those harsh working days, they would become exhausted and their health state would definitely decrease. Fortunately, these terrible things could be avoided if people choose the work they love. They would see their work as interesting challenges and feel the happiness instead of pressure. These positive sentiments could make up a happier life which is worth any price. To illustrate this point, I would like to talk about my cousin who had a really well-paid but not enjoying job. Two years ago, he dropped that job and took a course to become an artist. His colorful life now is the best answer to all the discouragements for his decision.
Secondly, doing the job that people love could help them have a greater career. The passion for the job could encourage people to invest their time in practicing and sharpening their skills and knowledge, therefore they can have expertise in their field. With that progress, they would definitely get the promotion and eventually accomplish extremely high salary. According to this flow, it’s reasonably possible to have the best of both worlds. My professor’s case would be the typical example for this. Since he was in university, he has aimed to a really new and challenging field that no one wanted to choose. After some difficult years of self-training, he now became one of three most influential figures of that field worldwide.
For these above reasons, I believe that people should definitely do the job they love instead of the well-paid but not interesting ones for the sake of a happier life and an extraordinary career. As a result, there is no doubt that we should find ourselves our true calling so that not to regret afterward.
- why go to university? 71
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- Why go to university? 78
- The contribution of young people to the community 70
- Agree or disagree: teachers should not provide their social and political views to their students 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93530997305 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73010563868 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4007062076 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.55 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133352029935 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444950993495 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321100338911 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850251350133 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034913366445 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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