Is it better for children to learn to read by using the online material or by using printed material?
Discuss and give your opinion.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is bolster dependency of internet causing people prefer to read online material. however, whether online reading is worth or not, has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums with no conclusive unanimous agreement achieved till date.This essay will highlight my point of view on this matter followed by a plausible conclusion.
First and foremost, with the massive advent of competition, there has been a colossal upsurge in the number of people would like to read online.There are myriad advantages why children prefer online reading. one of the best example is children can learn anywhere anytime with the ease of internet. children can watch any salient session multiple times and clear their philosophy. Moreover, less use of paper saves the Nature.There are plethora of solutions available for any problem. Accessibility is also one of the major factors of online reading.
On the other hand, another ancient way of study is via hardcopy, bunch of mass still prefer to go with printed material.Moreover, their eyesight does not get weak soon as compare to children who reads online. Secondly on lost of printed material children has to get another copy of them and it includes cost.Although it is tough to carry a bunch of material in the journey and printed material can be misplaced easily.
Taking everything into consideration, i think the points discussed above are convincing enough to lead me to the recapitulation that both aspects have their own merits and demerits, however in the competitive environment online study is growing tremendously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as to, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26538461538 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9616158831 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7997881353 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25950121576 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08233947466 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533654226508 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121873437706 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582963363721 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.