Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
进入练习
The issue of whether government should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of the athletics such as Olympic teams is very controversial. On the one side supporters of the idea that government should spend more in arts that in athletics explain that is art the reason that many countries exist through the history. On the other hand, critits maintain that spendig money in athlectics would be benefial for the countries too. However, after a very careful considarations, I maintain the idea tha is better that goverment spend money in arts for two reasons that I will explain in the essay.
First, through the years arts is the most important way that our ancesters expressed their ideas. They painted in deep caves where no one could see them. As a result, nowadays we can know the history of our ancesters and their cultures. I remember when I was studying in high school, I had a teacher that taugh me how important the arts was in the indian cultures. She always emphasized that indians learn to paint and create images with different textures without any tools that we use today. Eventhough their tools were rude their paintings are in the most famous museums in the world. That is why I prefer that government spend money in arts because in that way our nations can preserve the culture of our ancesters.
Secondly, if government spend money in arts many arts school that are destroyed can improve their logistic and the students that are interested inlearning the different kind of arts could matriculate in the academies.
For instance, my brother is an excellent artist, However he never could matriculate in the San Alejandro Art Academy because the school did not have enough resources to teach the students. That is why I emphasized that government must spend money in arts.
In conclusion through the art was the way that we learned about our ancesters and their history, also art schools help a hundreds of students to improve their abilities, those are the reasons because the government should spend money in improving all kind of manifestations of arts.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-21 | Take | 70 | view |
| 2023-05-20 | slliland | 90 | view |
| 2023-05-06 | waliwaliwa | 85 | view |
| 2023-02-12 | redark777 | 75 | view |
| 2023-02-11 | Ruuluu9073 | 70 | view |
- elephants have a surprising behavior 65
- technology has made children less creative than they were in the past? 61
- What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important 60
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 70
- People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a hundred'
Suggestion: a hundred
...nd their history, also art schools help a hundreds of students to improve their abilities,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hundred' or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: a hundred; hundreds
...nd their history, also art schools help a hundreds of students to improve their abilities,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86554621849 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61605455183 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49299719888 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8483550228 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250752556529 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091937166012 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120972451854 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13850644147 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106665104078 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.