there have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think that the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is argued that the greatest scientific discovery for development on almost aspect of our life in the last century is computer. In my opinion, I totally agree with this viewpoint.
First of all, one of the outstanding functions of this technological device is the enormous capacity. it could store up to billions of information such as images, records, songs, articles and so forth for daily personal interests rather than keeping them along set of CDs, newspapers which occupied many spaces in the past. Furthermore, they are sorted by users to search for information easily in case of need. In addition, the computer also is tremendous data storage tool for the workplace. For instance, in the medical system, it is more time-saving and effective for doctors to check the up-date health condition of each patient in the computer than doing them on the paper.
Secondly, the computer’s convenient properties are small and portable. Those characters not only help employee could engage in many productive tasks at their home but also help them with doing easier the jobs such as reports and presentations. In addition, the computer is the actually essential tool for a company’s new product launches, meeting or different department discussions. For university where undergraduates were familiar with carrying computer along with them to check timely up-to-date information namely schedules, registering the modules, references, online tuitions and other activities.
Nowadays, computer is one of the most necessary belongings for everyone in day-to-day activities and works. Indeed, the advent of computer has changed partly the different field and be more and more popular with us in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ogical device is the enormous capacity. it could store up to billions of informati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39179104478 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01605887884 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8959008937 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09251994846 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363641808726 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513583895162 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624520568134 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257561350462 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 40.7170731707 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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