You play sport.(e.g.football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in hospital.
Write a letter to your team mate. In your letter.
Say how to you feel about the news.
Ask about the treatment in the hospital.
Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up.
Dear Revathy,
How are you? hope everything is fine with you. I am still in excitement and anxiety that we are going to meet after a very long time. I hope there are no changes to your travel plan. Confirm your itenary at least two days before your date of travel.
As planned earlier, I could not come to pick you up from the airport. there are few client meetings that I need to tend to at office. Next week few clients and important delegates from Head office are visiting my office. Hence, my manager has asked me to facilitate their visit and meetings personally. Ergo, I could not be available for your pickup.
I wish I could be there when you land.
Nevertheless, I have arranged your pick up as per the original itenary you sent before. A good friend of mine, Renuka and her husband will be picking you up from the airport Exit gate after you land. She will be carrying your name board of course, to welcome you. I will send her mobile phone number by today, incase if you couldn’t locate her. Well, you always have my number also.
hope you don’t have any issues with that. Please do not hesitate either one of us any time.
Let me know if you need anything before. Can’t wait to meet you.
Bye until then,
With Luv always,
Joyce
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Revathy, How are you? hope everything is fine wit...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... Revathy, How are you? hope everything is fine with you. I am still...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...t come to pick you up from the airport. there are few client meetings that I need to ...
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Line 8, column 384, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...te her. Well, you always have my number also. hope you don't have any issues...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ell, you always have my number also. hope you don't have any issues with tha...
^^^^
Line 16, column 10, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...eet you. Bye until then, With Luv always, Joyce
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52586206897 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25203039582 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633620689655 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.059700485 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0476190476 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222490500803 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07261218001 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499660167579 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115736030908 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507183296671 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.81 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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