Nowadays, we are living in a throw-away society. What are its causes and what are its problems? What could be done to address this issue?
It has become a commonplace to see people purchase goods and only use them for a short period of time. This is happening because of some underlying factors which modern world has and also, this development is leading to severe consequences that are harzardous for all creatures. This essay will list some causes of throwaway culture and then, describe several problems which it can entail.
One cause of a throwaway society is a short-lived commodities. In other words, products being manufactured nowadays have very short expire date so that comsumers can use them for not so long. For example, much of foodstuff produced nowadays spoils quickly and people have to put it in a litterbox. As a result, they not only spend their finances, but also waste resources.
Another cause of this culture is a variety of products available for consumers. In comparison with the past, more merchandises are produced in today's world than in the past,which contributes to consumerism. To illustrate, if four or five decades ago people had to wear clothes till uselessness, then now individuals can afford to buy clothes and wear them how long they want.
A major problem that is occuring is contamination of ecology. As people stop using goods , governments have to eliminate these disposes by either burring it or burning, but still consequences of these processes also harm the environment and surrounding habitants. Many villages might be a case in point. They are exposed to smoke of burning garbage which pollutes the air and consequently, these people become deceased with canser and other illnesses.
To conclude, there are some causes and negative effects of a throwaway culture. While the main reasons of it are the short usage and wide range of goods, the major issue happening is the ecological devastation. In my opinion, people should deal with this dilemma as fast as possible, if they want to save the planet Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, then, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04716981132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83064289252 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8610049339 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760462446399 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282387404017 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286299778335 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042763056339 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153336641015 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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