A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
The author suggests that, if a person becomes a criminal knowingly then he/she should not hold any civil rights and also he/she can't benefit from his/her labor. I agree with this claim of author of punishing the criminal and reparations need to be paid for setting an example in society.
First, if a person had committed a crime then that person should be punished for his/her crimes. when a person commits crime, it leads to injustice with someone else and that can effect other person's/group's/organisation's. For this, repairs need to be paid, with retaining civil rights and benefit from criminal's labor ,they cannot be repaid but can be taken into consideration
Second, if a person who committed crime is not punished it can set out imbalance in the whole society. With strict measures against the criminals, there will be fear maintained in society for committing such crimes. Also, according to statistical data, crimes are less in regions where there are strict punishment for crimes. So, using fear as a factor can help to keep crimes in control.
However, according to some human rights organization, if a criminal is punished in severe ways, that won't help criminals to turn to right path after their punishment is done.This suggestion of organisation can be only possible for the criminals who have done crimes, which had not affected someone's life or those crimes were done by total influence of surrounding. This suggestion will never be acceptable for the criminals who have done heinous crimes,they all need to be punished and there's no chance of civil rights for them.
In conclusion, any person who commits crime intentionally need to be punished and there's no chance of giving civil rights to them until their tenure of punishment is done. It is justice which maintains the balance in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t hold any civil rights and also he/she cant benefit from his/her labor. I agree wit...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...t hold any civil rights and also he/she cant benefit from his/her labor. I agree wit...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... should be punished for his/her crimes. when a person commits crime, it leads to inj...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...injustice with someone else and that can effect other persons/groups/organisation...
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Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... rights and benefit from criminals labor ,they cannot be repaid but can be taken i...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egions where there are strict punishment for crimes. So, using fear as a factor c...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ght path after their punishment is done.This suggestion of organisation can be only ...
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Line 4, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...e criminals who have done heinous crimes,they all need to be punished and theres no c...
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Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...crimes,they all need to be punished and theres no chance of civil rights for them. In...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...e intentionally need to be punished and theres no chance of giving civil rights to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01655629139 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95045747866 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9075790665 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289206985002 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117633195406 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10497128123 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185988449834 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720271346065 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.