Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the
financial support they need in order to thrive.
The Statement Contends that major cities of any nation should
receive more financial support by nation in order to grow . The
statement is debatable. In My point of view, if a country give
financial support to any big city this can provide huge benefits to the
government in future. Many new opportunities will be created for
public.
First, if the big cities get financial support to which they require, then
overall economy the city will rise. People from other cities or country
will get attracted and visit the city. This will give huge financial
outcomes to nation Also country overall GDP will increase. the
standard of living will also rise. Many new Multinational companies
might will invest in the city so creating new jobs in the city.This will
increase employment opportunities and unemployment rate will
decrease. If any culture or tradition is famous in any city
government should take measures to enlighten those tradition or
new ancient sculpture or monument is there government should
take measures to preserve those monuments.So, This will give rise
in foreign tourist in the nation. So , Foreign currency will arrive in
the country, and nation will be benefited. Thus, nation will be
recognised by that city.
However, Every coin has two sides .Because new opportunities will
be created this will give rise to number of population in the city also
due to this crime rate in city might also increase. Also, if other minor
cities should also not be neglected at same time. They should also
be given enough benefits for them to grow . All the people have
right to get all the benefits provided by government. Because they
are overlooked this might lead them to do some violent activities in
the nation and will hinder the overall economy of the nation . Also
this might happen that they get influenced by some terrorist
organisation for some small amount and conduct terrorist activities
in major cities. This will hinder the major cities and instead nation
overall reputation will decrease.
In Conclusion , if this happens then rich will get richer and poorer
will become poorer.The government should give support to major
cities but at same time other smaller ones should be also not
neglected. Because for country to flourish they should look for
overall benefit all the cities not particular selected ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 33.0 12.4196629213 266% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23116883117 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56572256516 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438961038961 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8225828159 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9047619048 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.97078651685 724% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142219095015 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533220220518 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559482565604 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454395764396 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533245913585 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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