You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear James,
I’ve recently got your letter and feel a bit disappointed as there is no opportunity to talk to each other more frequent. However, I’m very glad that you have graduated a high school and going to start a new life soon. I pondor you should take a break from academics and try to do work for a while. there are more difficult subjects there and you will have caught up with studying and don’t have a free time at all.
By the way, there are a lot of programs provided by local companies in your city that aimed to employ predominantly youth. this is a good opportunity for you to try yourself working and, moreover, collect money for your forthcoming education. When you finally decide to study in college or university, you’ll have enough cash to pay your studying fees.
I want to advise you to buy some local newspapers. there are units with job advertisements. But first of all, you need to make an appropriate CV. don’t forget to note your communication abilities. I think, consultant in supermarket is good job position to start with. Especially, in electronic department. this is your field.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you about job finding and wish you good luck!
Your sincerely,
Givi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, i think, by the way, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91588785047 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83910713145 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644859813084 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.149906535 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253074803149 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797317288954 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660349349754 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170586188338 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428694989718 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.