Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?A minimum number of physical education credits should be required for graduation college.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A minimum number of physical education credits should be required for graduation college.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, a large amount of colleges does not require physical education credits for graduation. Personally, I believe that there should be no standardized requirements and sport should be an independent person’s choice. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all people are individual and have different habits and priorities. Many students wish to focus fully on their studies in the area that they have chosen. Continuously, physical education credits put learners under the pressure. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Due to my lifestyle, I spend a big part of my day training, but despite this, I am still obliged to pass standards on physical education. For me, it is just a waste of time, as I want to concentrate fully on my studies while being at the University. Secondly, physical education is too unified. Student’s desires and hobbies are not counted, as there is a global system for all Universities of the country. Furthermore, it stands against the principles of democracy and equality of rights. For instance at my school we had to get credits for gymnastics every year, which I have hated for all my life. In such a way, I could not be an excellent student, although being successful in other kinds of sport and having the best marks in all other subjects. In conclusion, I believe that students should be responsible for their body conditions on their own. Without a full concentration great goals cannot be reached. Current system oppresses a large amount of pupils who cannot fully realize the potential.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96654275093 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99733393602 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7219097012 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5882352941 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187792079952 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599704747673 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519059735619 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187792079952 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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