Some students want to attend a university in their home country,others desire to finish their university education abroad. Which do you think is a better way to get university education? Why? Give specific reasons.
In global system, the education at abroad becomes so easy thanks to developped possibilities of communication and transportation. Thus, the students face to the question of the education in own country or at abroad. The answer of this question bases on several points such as the quality, the economic aspect, the achievement, the cultural coherence etc. In view of these points I support the education in own country.
Above all, it is necessary to think over the essence of the university education. If the matter is to comprehend the backbone of a field, a student should perfectly apprehend the...
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Sentence: If a student in a foreign university has not sufficient revenu or financial aid, this student noodles over this issue and that may cause a failure at the university.
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Sentence: There will be seperat kitchen culture, social struucture etc. The student at abroad may deal with a matter of coherence in this different cultural circumstance.
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Sentence: Put in all, by considerating these reasons, I compeletely defend the education in own country.
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