In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
smoking is injurious to health not only for oneself but also for others. The government has also realised this and steps are getting implemented to make create awareness among the massess. one such step which the government has taken is to forbid smoking in public spaces and imposing fines on those who smoke in public places. Infact if an individual wants to smoke then he or should go out of the building which is a fair decision taken .
In public spaces there are non smokers adults & children also who feel discomfort because of the smoke. there are lot of incidencies of fire also because of this smoking activity one such incident happened in the nearby locality of mine which I would like to elaborate. there is a restaurant just opposite to my House wherein mostly families come to dine. there were some youths who were having a party at the restaurant . there is a live counter in the restaurat which was just getting set up . one of the guys was smoking and inisited to see the cooking area . so he entered the kitchen and he had this cigar in his hand. The restaurant staff told him he should not lit the cigar when in the kitchen as there are cylinand the area is under renovas tiondBgar there took a fire and things were destrouyed. Luckily only 2 people were injured. You cannot actually take anybody life at risk of yours. Its good that there is a ban atleast lot of health related issues are sorted out .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5546875 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34449341637 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4165134456 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164009324084 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535234399815 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548485265287 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14115375559 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463543588415 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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