Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable , but others say that having a great amount of weath can bring some problems.
What do you think are the advantages and the disadvantages of having a lot of money?
On debating whether having much money is good or bad , someone believes it makes a better life while others claim that it causes many issues. To me, money brings to our life both benefits and drawbacks.
On one hand, it’s the most obvious thing that money raises living standards. It can satisfy our needs such as physiology, education, entertainment , ect. Not only do you not face finance problems but also have time to enjoy your life. Moreover, you can play an active part in society. According to a recent survey, many well-off people are eager to spend their money and time on social activities and volunteer work. By devoting to society, your life will be more happy and meaningful. Lastly, money gives you opportunities to pursuit bigger things such as social status or academy <span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="or "></span>. In today’s world, people can’t live without money. That’s why having a lot of money makes difference.
On the other hand, you will get a big deal of problems due to money. Being rich, somebody becomes arrogant and selfish. It leads to a lonely and boring life because others will keep away from you. Besides, if you inherit money from your forefathers, you may not understand the real meaning of money. Therefore, you will probably waste a significant amount of money on having fun and satisfying your desires. Last but not least, to a part of upper class, their life is too busy and full of trouble. Especially, robbers will make rich people live under the threat of being attacked and burgled.
In summary, money is a crucial factor. However, we shouldn’t influence our life on money because it can never replace friends, family and happiness. Everyone need to find the right balance between enjoying themselves and earning money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11784511785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15594329422 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7612265224 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.380952381 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30238738713 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947990252438 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534832531675 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185770802993 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026096889761 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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