The graph shows the information of languages choosed by 13-year- old students in school in a country.

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The graph shows the information of languages choosed by 13-year- old students in school in a country.

The graph illustrates the information about french and mandarin lamguage selected by 13 year old students in a school in England.

Overall, a wide range of students spoke french than mandarin. In the beginning, french language was used by many students, it was sharply hidh and it gradually drops slightly with fluctuations it remails constant whereas mandarin language was utilised by few students, it gets increased slowly and in a stable state.

In 2000. around 150 students have sopken french language. Surprisingly, it has been slumped to 90 studentsin the year 2005. Although mamdarin was not merely spoken in 2000, it was elevated to 75 students in the same year. Both the languagesare used by the students between 2006 to till now and also with variations of 10 students. Moreover, Mandarin language was followed by 75 students whereas french was used by 85 students. There is a drastic difference in the usage of two languages in commencement however stays stable at the end of the period till now with slight variations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Around
...owly and in a stable state. In 2000. around 150 students have sopken french languag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06432748538 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82319897402 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.3808201253 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217747371335 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884939401068 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10562142878 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198707523394 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142647927681 0.0819641961636 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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