many people try to look younger than their age. what are the causes people do this ?
do you think this is good thing or bad thing ?
Although attempt to look younger is thought by some to be positive thing, other people think that it can be harmful. In my opinion, I consider that efforts to look younger has more benefits as compared to any negative thing it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic causes people consider for looking younger. Firstly, it can boost the self-confidence for the person and increases the energy level. People who belive they are younger are more active and are conscious about their health. Secondly, in professional environment, those who look younger and takes better care of themselves are generally awarded with better opportunities and successful career. For instance, lot of organization consider overall personality of candidate before giving job offer. One of the major reason is people do try to look younger as this is one of the social trend.
Nevertheless, people gets multiple benefits of looking younger. To begin with, people avoid harmful products to look younger this improves their health. For instance, people do not eat sugar to reduce weight and in result avoids common disease such as diabetes. In additional, in order to look young people try to follow latest dressing trend and that provides a lot of job opportunities for fashion industry. Furthermore, people follow regular exercise schedule to look younger which result in improving their life expectancy.
In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe its is good to invest time and energy to look young and keep up the most important gift has given us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72237261836 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7428438662 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369957992866 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12948157277 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810193714261 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204002312553 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715194432353 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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