The best way to educate children is by using the internetin every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?
It is believed that the best way to educated children is by using the internet in every lesson. I personally disagree with this opinion to some extent, and i will explain in this essay.
Firstly, it is true that the advance of technology has become an invetable part of human life, people have been allowed to access throughly information around the world which is easier and faster than in the past. Internet has been omnipresent nearly in all aspects including in education system. This trend can not denied that internet affects highly educated children's lives. In information case, it noticeably provides more knowledge than book. For instance, a book only has limited explanation about knowledge because of the lack of sources which is used
as reference in writing.
By contrast, though internet gives many benefits to children education, it also has downside. In this modern era, the use of internet might change the way of our communication. For instance, the children will unable to interact with their environment because they spend lots of time to use more the internet. Moreover, because access to the internet become uncontrollable, everyone is able to use it easily. It is apparent from their ations that they forget their purpose in study. Finally, impact of technology brings two side, positive will always be accompanied by negative case.
Furthermore, another way which can be applied is having discussion to improve the children critical thinking, the text way is providing boundaries to student without stopping them to explore and discover new ideas and the last way is providing a feedback between teachers and students in order to enhance learning and students outcomes.
Overall, it seems to me that impact of internet might show new issues in children education lives. It can be solved as long as teachers and parents work together to support the increase of highly educated quality which ensure that children only attain information from all qualified sources and data.
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- The best way to educate children is by using the internetin every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children? 84
- The best way to educate children is by using the internetin every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children? 67
- The best way to educate children is by using the internetin every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68891038401 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4899342513 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243647798416 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847060404432 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104573308572 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131313031203 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120368134278 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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