The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The internet is a global tool, which became popular in the early nineties. The internet as improved our access to information that ain't readily available. This essay will discuss, the extent at which it has made positive impact with complementing examples.
Firstly, before the internet came into existence, people were living life, and also getting the necessary information required. Since the invention of internet, a lot of people can't do without it. Internet has helped in time saving. The valuable time used for checking out books from counters to sections to libraries is eradicated. It can all be gotten at the finger tips, courtesy the internet.
However, the internet also helps in maximizing space. It's no longer relevant to store lots of book which occupies space, when they can all be gotten from the internet and downloaded to a personal computer.This has also helped health-wise, limiting the luggage needed to be carried by a significant amount, thereby reducing the risk of ailments associated with the carriage. Not forgetting how it helps in reducing household pests. Books serves as comfortable habitat to some kind of pests like bedbugs and roaches. .
In addition, internet as helped global community as a whole by encouraging the sustainability of the environment. Internet has been known to create little or no waste likewise the other sources of information. It has also helped in using little or no agricultural products.
In conclusion, with the internet, little or no need for going to the library, so as less negative impact on the environment. Which encourages easier ways of accomplishing research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23282442748 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9438597202 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.6078119344 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104668942079 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343380402065 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255579972761 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599169414157 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281764155826 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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