Some parents buy and allow their children anything they ask or want. Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have on children as they grow older?
In this contemporary era, every child is pestering their parents for buying different things and or let them do as per their own will. Some parents bow-down to their decedent’s needs, which could lead adolescents to take wrong path in the future to fulfil their own need either by hook or by crook. This would lead child to stubbornness and lack of primitive understanding in their adult age.
Fulfilling each and every ask and want is certainly a good manner as per the parents' point of view, but it corrodes maturity. In fact, this will gradually create rigidity in one’s mind. As a result, whenever something is not happening according to their mindset they likely to take the wrong path. For instance, as per the survey of the University of Columbia, they observed that the children of wealthy family prone to cultivate criminal mindset, when something goes against their will. This could be the major consequence in terms of satisfying their tiny baseless needs.
Another reason is that they often lack understanding because of their ego. In fact, those children who brought-up under these circumstances miss out the theory of equality and believe themselves as a superior decision taker. As a result, in their adulthood, they really would not be the best fit in any corporate sector and thus find themselves as lonely and disappointed. For instance, the American government’s study had shown that some affluent families’ children often isolated from the rest of the world due to the sense of superiority. They have not been the best fit for any occupation, not even their own family business.
To deduce, as per the aforementioned bizarre consequences I can say that this parenting strategy might give temporary contention to a child but it will be proven disastrous as they grow older. Good advise for better parenting is to give logical clarification of their needs and wants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, thus, for instance, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07619047619 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91767621012 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7264105014 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342361746446 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103757207219 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358539916319 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200649727498 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034946421404 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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