You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
write at least 150 words.
you do not need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................,
Dear Mariam,
How are you doing, i hope all is well?. I'm excited writing to you, because series of events have unfolded and i want you to be the first to know.
I had to leave Aiico insurance where I work because i was underpaid, moreover my job description increased which wasn't stated in the initial contract I signed. I applied for a better job which I got, and recently moved into the official apartment my new job provided.
Presently, i work as a personal assistant to the managing director of Rosebank cosmetics. Basically my job entails organizing my boss day, scheduling his meetings and writing reports. I feel more productive at this new job.
Here comes the good news! on the tenth of this month, Jimi my boyfriend since 2015 popped the question. He asked me to marry him. To be sincere i never expected it, because he never talks about getting married.
Mariam, Stand up, get ready, we've a wedding to plan, so you know, you're my chief bridesmaid. i have butterflies rumbling in my tummy. Hoping to hear from you soon. XOXO
Yours Sincerely
Eniola.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mariam, How are you doin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mariam, How are you doing, i hope all is well?. ...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r Mariam, How are you doing, i hope all is well?. Im excited writing t...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...How are you doing, i hope all is well?. Im excited writing to you, because series ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ause series of events have unfolded and i want you to be the first to know. I ...
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Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve Aiico insurance where I work because i was underpaid, moreover my job descript...
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Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...over my job description increased which wasnt stated in the initial contract I signed...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ment my new job provided. Presently, i work as a personal assistant to the man...
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Line 10, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: On
...s new job. Here comes the good news! on the tenth of this month, Jimi my boyfri...
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Suggestion: we've
...arried. Mariam, Stand up, get ready, weve a wedding to plan, so you know, youre m...
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...y, weve a wedding to plan, so you know, youre my chief bridesmaid. i have butterflies...
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Suggestion: I
...so you know, youre my chief bridesmaid. i have butterflies rumbling in my tummy. ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my. Hoping to hear from you soon. XOXO Yours Sincerely Eniola.
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. XOXO Yours Sincerely Eniola.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77127659574 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5771647122 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7251929324 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0714285714 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186588029826 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619123493026 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480934019049 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093500241712 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615418588036 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.