You recently red an article in newspaper and come to know that article was written by your freiend. Since you don't have the contact details for your friend. Write a letter to newspaper and mention.
- What is the article about?
- Why you need contact details?
- How newspaper company can help you?
Dear Sir/Madam,
this is with reference the article published regarding the wild animals in your newspaper on dated 15th January 2019. Firstly, I must appreciate your newspaper for giving such an amazing articles for the readers. I have been reading your paper since I was young. And I should admire the list of content and the manifold streams represent throughout the pages and the up to the minute news for the users. The political cartoons are one of my favourites and the range of wise writers who publish their invaluable notes are really fascinating.
Secondly, I need to inform that the main purpose of writing this letter. I recognised the person who writes the above mentioned article and he was one of my university colleague whom I have not contacted for a long time. More importantly, I need to contact him for appreciation ceremony which we can pay our gratitude for his service to our country and nature. Eventhough, I incurred lots of efforts and time to find the contact details of this person, I could not to succeed. And soon after I found this article, it was like the light at the end of the tunnel for me. if we could not arrange the ceremony within next two months the fundings would allocate to some other work.
Moreover, it would be an immense support if your company agree to reveal the contact information of the owner of above mentioned article. I hope you understand the importance of this accreditation which enhance his reputation in turn it will be an advantage for this paper as well. As a responsible business partner your company will also able to contribute to this remarkable occasion. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Dennis
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| 2019-02-24 | hweerasinghe2 | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'article'?
Suggestion: article
...ur newspaper for giving such an amazing articles for the readers. I have been reading yo...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be an advantage for this paper as well. As a responsible business partner your com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81972789116 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67251934791 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9642037466 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5625 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324109873225 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952174755485 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652740213921 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192655345477 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206393106113 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.