It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Human discovered many land space on earth but till 19th century, it's not possible to go such place where human can live. With advancement in technology and science that thing become possible. Now a days many scientists and tourists travel to remote natural environment places like South Pole. In this essay we will see what are the advantages and disadvantages of travel to this kind of places.
In terms of advantages, Human will never know wants on the land until go there and find out by themselves. Which kinds of mortals and trees are there. How they survive there with crucial environment conditions. In last couple of years, due to satellite and camera scientists are monitoring activities and environment there. All the information that collected are very useful in terms of bio-research and development. After putting the first step on south pole, they start testing soil and animal behaviour. On a point of tourism, people who live there gets employment and money. Also, Some of the research organization provide few of facility to their residents.
Where ever human go on earth, they start uses which ever natural resources, they get without thinking for moment. In reaction, temperature start increasing, effects like global warming and greenhouse take place. When they live there, they dump all the garbage on that land. Vehicle which they use for transportation put contribution in air pollution. If there are any wild animal they see then for their safety purpose they kill animal like polar bear. All this leads to the disasters.
In conclude, Scientists and travels have to keep in mind that places like south pole are essential part of global cycle. And we are the only one who have to take care this type of places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62902544269 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5303893161 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.75 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228588195358 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589084458271 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942193710299 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149277923704 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126957825807 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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