Some people believe that violent films are bad for you and encourage people to be violent, others argue that violence and films are unreleased because violence existed before films.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few people deem that people do cruel acts by watching brutal movies; therefore, these films are considered to be negative, whereas others disgruntled with this notion by arguing that there is no relation between violence and movies due to its pre-existence before films. This essay partially agrees with these statements which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, movies are become indispensable parts of every human's lifestyle. As viewers are highly influenced by the content showing in the films, they also reckon that whatever happens in the movies is legit whether it is right or wrong. Consequently, people imitate their favorite actor or idol by copying the actions of celebrities. For example, a serial killer who was arrested by police, confessed that he got the idea of killing people from the movies to become famous. Therefore,the argument is justifiable that movies can humiliate people to act violently.
On the contrary, the existence of brutality can be seen earlier than the invention of films. This is because there are myriad of evidence which are full of violence such as, dreadful battles fought by emperors, world wars and many more. In addition to that, people only act violently when they feel peril from others. To exemplify, a survey from Oxford university showed that the pivotal reason for cruel behavior is the self-defense or to protect others from being harmed. Moreover, it does not have any connection with watching movies. Thus, one could depict that violence and films separate things without having relation with one-other.
By agglomerating above mentioned factors, it is concluded that though people may sometimes impress by watching movies to do violent actions, I believe that brutality and films do not have any connections. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should act carefully while they follow their idols or actor because it may have detrimental consequences or undesirable ramifications.
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Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82188195208 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4073524443 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268828102818 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753628877783 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657321806774 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160880709694 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523834608384 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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