The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Dear Sir or Ma,
my name is awojobi hannah, I am one of your frequent customers.I am writing to report a television I bought from your store last week.
On the 22nd January, I purchase a Samsung television from your store.it has the code tv LED 6PQ7391.When I got home ,I switched on the newly purchased tv and to my surprise, I try using the remote control and its not working properly.In addition the image of the tv is quite blurry.After noticing this problem,I called the customer service department and explained all the details to them.The manager assured the issue will be rectify and that he will send a technician to my apartment the following day.It has been a week today still yet ,nobody has come to fix the faulty television.
However, I am very disappointed about the quality of the product sold by your company and the poor services. I want the company to replace the faulty television with a new one or get a technician to fix the problem within one or two days.
I look forward hearing back from you immediately.
Yours faithfully,
awojobi hannah.
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- The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...te control and its not working properly.In addition the image of the tv is quite b...
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...ix the problem within one or two days. I look forward hearing back from you imm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71276595745 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78426835888 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.345269489 44.8134815571 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 76.5299724578 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 16.8248392259 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00758020479064 0.216113520407 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00368928578245 0.0766984524023 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00824949379799 0.0603063233224 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00589122080843 0.12726935374 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102038937588 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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