the new media have become more influential in people’s life, some people think it is a negative problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Thanks for the advanced of technology, new media dominated human life with Internet, television, magazines,etc. While I agree that such phenomena is harmful to some extent, I am convinced that its merits are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some demerits that media might bring to human life. The first one is the quality of information. Mass media spreads an intense source of knowledge but many information is exaggerated or unreliable due to some particular purposes. For example, despite of the deficit budget, a conglomerate posed a article on local newspaper to praise their financial condition which aims to attract investment from the security market. Another hazard are bullying and harassment on the Internet which are poses a threat to both adult and children. In fact, everyday, many people was bombarded by black mails and negative messages from fake ID which could be signed up easily in social networks.
On the other hand, i argue that the advantages of mass media far outweigh its disadvantages. First of all, media is an essential part of globalization. It has eliminated country’s boundaries by updating information about other cultures. Moreover, with the aid of Internet, it is easier for people to keep in touch with friends living in oversea country. Secondly, many world-changing products have been introduced to public by media. for instance, electric cigarette is believed to help many people give up traditional cigarette which is critical factor caused lung cancer. Last but not least, many talent youngsters might gain popularity because some social networks such as Facebook or Instagram create opportunities for them to show their talents to netizens.
In conclusion, although new media is associated with some shortcomings, I am of the opinion that it brings greater benefits to human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ife with Internet, television, magazines,etc. While I agree that such phenomena is h...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...eads an intense source of knowledge but many information is exaggerated or unreliabl...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...eads an intense source of knowledge but many information is exaggerated or unreliable due to som...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he deficit budget, a conglomerate posed a article on local newspaper to praise th...
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Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...at to both adult and children. In fact, everyday, many people was bombarded by black mai...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in social networks. On the other hand, i argue that the advantages of mass media...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ave been introduced to public by media. for instance, electric cigarette is believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30034129693 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99040387686 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6781977287 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200988707086 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584045128651 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042823686729 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126644945456 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265561559049 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.