Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In every era, people have different hobbies around the globe. As per the recent research, it has been identified that nowadays people have unique hobbies instead of conventional book reading or gardening. There are two dimensions of this topic; one group of people is of the view that hobby should be challenging; whereas other group asserts the opposite aspect that it is upon one’s will completely. I agree to the phenomenon that hobbies should be difficult and different in nature. I shall elaborate my stance with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, first and foremost reason for an interest to be difficult is recognition through interest. One’s interest should be such that can benefit in practical life. For instance, I personally know a guy who likes to explore different avenues over the internet. He explored Microsoft Excel tool and did complete research on its functionality and usage. He achieved high level expertise against the tool out of his interest and eventually got a well reputed job in a multinational company based on his expertise. Thus, one’s hobby should be useful for career progression as well.
To elucidate my stance further, hobby should be tough in order to achieve sense of accomplishment while one’s enjoy doing it. For instance, if anyone has interest in bungee jumping or scuba diving; this cannot be enjoyed without proper training. Once fully trained, when attempted, one would feel sense of achievement. This accomplishment cannot be achieved through regular or common hobbies such as listening to music or reading.
To summarize the aforementioned argument, I opine that people should opt-in for tough interests in order to achieve productive results instead of only enjoying spare time. In future, people will adapt complex hobbies so that positive outcomes could be attained while enjoying the activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85822781658 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8944080198 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230154632446 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803075089299 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616427333563 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145801559131 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176976540268 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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