Some people think that coins and paper money will vanish in a few years. We will only use plastic cards or some other form of electronic currency. Is this a positive or negative development?
money is a means of exchange for the purchase of goods or services. Some persons suggest that physical money will be replaced with cashless payment methods in years to come. In my opinion, this is a good advancement because it would reduce robbery, and bring down the rate of spontaneous spendings.
The most important benefit of cashless society is that the rate of swindling would be reduced. people would no longer move around carrying physical cash, this discourages pick pocketing, armed robbery, stealing and so on. Those engaged in this acts would be forced to look for a legit means of earning money. A case in point, is the statistically figure released by The Nigerian Police that the rate of pick pocketing has increased in recent time by twenty percent because of the introduction of high currency denominations in the country. this statistic shows people carry more money thereby attracting criminals to themselves.
Furthermore, it decreases people's urge to purchase unplanned things. they would not be able to easily access cash, in pratronising traders hawking by the road sides, this reduce the possibility of buying items they do not need. For example, A recent research shows that seventy five percent of people who reside in cities purchase items in traffic which are neither necessary nor needed by them. they would be able to differentiate between wants and needs, using their resources only for buying essential commodities and become better managers of their funds.
In conclusion, money makes living more enjoyable. A school of thought proposed that the means of exchange will be through cards in the future as against the current trend of using currencies. I believe this has more benefits, because sporadic purchasing and theft would be eradicated making the society more safe and secured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23648648649 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68826379569 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6639999238 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131316372136 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462056950691 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387853167848 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834939869908 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259573674539 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.