Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, many governments only concentrate on improving economic progress because they assume that this is the most important thing to a country. But some individuals believe that other types of progress are equally crucial for a country. In my opinion, it would be better to develop simultaneously
In the one hand, economic progress is purely important because it brings numerous benefits. Firstly, economic progress involved in a developing country. When a country have a good economic, they could expand more field that helps them generate more money. Many countries have a tendency to connect each other to make a huge profits, especially exchanging commercial. For instance, Vietnam co-operate with American in order to export rice and create profits for farmers. Thus Vietnam revenue increase in a billion VNĐ in several year thanks to co-operating foreign countries. Furthermore, having a good economic could help a large of people, specially the poor. The poor will be received government grant so they have not to live with the hungry. According to the newest report, the rate of poverty in Vietnam decrease in 59% to the previous year. This is a good signal showing Vietnam is promoted economic drastically thus people would have a better life
In the other hand, personally, I strongly believe that governments focus only on economic progress is inadequate. Besides that they should promote other types of progress equally such as education progress, traffic progress or medical progress. Nowadays, education problems appears densely since students often play truant or dropout, specially in remote regions, students could not learn due to bad opportunity. Or about traffic problem, as far as I know, Vietnam should pay attention to repair ancient roads because of a serious downgrading. Moreover, government should improve the law due to people safety. For instance, the rate of death because of accident is definitely high specifically, having 400 people dies in this year. Therefore, other types of progress is very crucial as well hence government need to focus it at the same time.
In conclusion, I completely approve of promoting all types of progress not only economic progress in order to country could develop totally, although some people still believe that needing to concentrate only on economic progress
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33875338753 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79525337682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6068700223 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.684210526 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285263752174 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921932241119 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928647495621 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208881454449 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843791811544 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.