You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Smith,
I am writing to let you know that recently I had come across an advertisement about the python classroom training course. The course will also offers hands on learning experience on in-house projects which make sure the proper understanding of the topic. this language will helpful in enhancing my skill set as well as increase the variety of technology used in current team. I hope you will consider my situation.
The classes would be conducted on alternate days of the week i.e., Monday, Wednesday and Friday. As the start time of training is overlapping with the working hours. I ask you to assign me task as per my availability so that I can finish my assigned work on time . Apart from that I would like you to put up a request with Finance and HR department for tuition fees reimbursement from the organization as this training will be helpful in meeting the clients demand.
In this month-long coaching , every session will discuss different aspects to Automation testing using python. The python has been considered as next generation language and helpful in designing machine learning patterns. this language will help us in creating and delivering a prototype for client and give an edge over other organization biding for same project.
I hope you consider my request favourably.
Your faithfully,
Jack
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... over other organization biding for same project. I hope you consider my req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, apart from, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1221719457 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83949644322 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651583710407 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3994731951 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0769230769 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268561168826 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838050708997 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498184811278 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135149060719 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418496166951 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.