Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
It is said that with great power, comes great responsibility. This is true for anyone, and more so for big corporations that have no lack of
resources and monetary power. Ultimately, the main purpose of corporations is to make as much money as possible, but this should happen
in a responsible manner considering the well being of the society and environment.
In the initial stages, most corporations don't have the financial abilities to look beyond their own expenditure. Hence, they do not have the
capability of performing charitable deeds. However, once they become established, they must start to expand their reach towards benevolent
causes because they have the resources to do what individuals may not be able to do.
Corporations must take note of the effects of their activities on the environment and promote causes that would mitigate the ill effects of
such activities in order to ensure environmental stability and help sustain the activities for a longer period of time. Not only this, efforts
must be taken to continuously change the nature of these activities to prevent permanent environmental damage from occurring in the first place.
Many nations have policies that compel large corporations to engage in social causes that would help uplift certain section of society or help
individuals lead a better life. However, simply doing this for the sake of compliance will not help the cause. Extra effort must be taken to
promote the welfare of people who are not able to take care of themselves.
While corporations should focus their primarily on making as much money as they can, they need to understand that they will not be able to truly
do so in the fullest capacity unless the environment and the society around them is also prospering at a steady rate, for the conditions around
them determine how successful they become.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 50
- Education makes machines which act like men and produces men who act like machines 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible manner" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ey as possible, but this should happen in a responsible manner considering the well being of the socie...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n the initial stages, most corporations dont have the financial abilities to look be...
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Line 10, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...elp sustain the activities for a longer period of time. Not only this, efforts must be taken ...
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Line 18, column 58, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding society'?
Suggestion: the surrounding society
...est capacity unless the environment and the society around them is also prospering at a steady rate, fo...
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Line 18, column 123, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding conditions'?
Suggestion: the surrounding conditions
...s also prospering at a steady rate, for the conditions around them determine how successful they become.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14379084967 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84443663494 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1926040833 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241186668926 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791148243784 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059822893895 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815445078171 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571349222331 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.