the drawback of having a gun in home.

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the drawback of having a gun in home.

It is dangerous for people when they are permitted to own a kind of weapon such as a gun in their house. The reason is that individuals have a tendency to live privately nowadays in modern society, so they are easier to be extremely stressful when facing to a great deal of pressure from a heavy workload or broken relationships. Specifically, living alone without sharing ups and downs in life with others, people are likely to commit suicide. At that time, with a gun in home, it is really easy for them to kill themselves.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 431.0 1977.66487455 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 95.0 407.700716846 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53684210526 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.12198564135 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73692307573 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 212.727598566 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726315789474 0.524837075471 138% => OK
syllable_count: 142.2 618.680645161 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3782448259 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148287012538 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788546792043 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669737057071 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148287012538 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.4 Out of 6.0
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