In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing.
Why? Is this a positive or negative development?
There is an upward trend in numerous countries that Western-based style of dressing is in vogue while traditional clothes gradually become obsolete among citizens. The reasons for this are varied, and I would argue that both the pros and cons should be discussed.
There are two main factors contributing to the global popularity of suits and jeans. First, since the young generation has great admiration for Western celebrities who are deemed stylish and fashionable, they imitate the dressing style of these stars. It is linked to the fact that when an individual sports like his idol, it may enhance his sense of pride and self-confidence. Apart from that, Western attires are more comfortable than Eastern traditional clothing which is oftentimes considered fairly fussy. Take Ao Dai as a typical example of traditional dresses; despite its aesthetic quality and gorgeous look, the wearers find it difficult to take part in physical activities. Compared to this conventional dress of Vietnam, T-shirts, which are Western-related design, are more likely to create comfort when people get dressed it in.
This phenomenon should be pondered carefully in both advantageous and disadvantageous perspective. On the positive side, modern clothing is able to build up confidence among youths. This may result in them leading a more optimistic lifestyle. However, there may be a potential threat of cultural assimilation as young people possibly forget their nation’s traditional characteristic and hold great appeal for Western-based lifestyle. More severely, some may go against their cultural values due to over-idolizing foreign stars.
In conclusion, appreciation for Western celebrities and the comfort in sporting are two principal precursors for the dominance of Western-based apparel, and mixed outcomes could result from this tendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61071428571 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16008064674 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.096658673 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160215211115 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516508110304 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039345740456 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957269220641 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123136654672 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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