You travel by bus every weekday morning, and you always use the same bus route.
Recently the bus has not been reliable. It sometimes come late and for this last few mornings it has not when you hailed it. You have also noticed that is far dirtier then it used to be.
Write to the bus company. Explain the situation and tell them what you want them to do
Dear sir / madam
I am writing this letter to tell you about the bus service which allocated by your Road transport department on the pala route. I am the regular passenger who travels on the path in the morning as well as in evening also.
Firstly, few days I am observing set the bus service is not reliable and the frequency on the route degrading day by day. Moreover, sometimes it arrives late at departing station and daily commutators suffers a lot. Nowadays the behaviour bus staff also changed and they talk in arrogant way with women and senior citizens. In the addition, the bus driver do not stop the bus on the station even after hailing in front of it. Secondly, no earlier information circulated about the change in the bus schedule at local media. Lastly, the interior condition of bus is also deteriorating . In the similar citing, no proper labelling of sitting arrangement and cleanliness of floor and seats also minimized.
I hope your company would look aggressively on the numerous issues in short period. I will look forward to hear your response in the form of improved services. Morley, your company will take strict action on the bus staff and follow all the rules and regulations wisely.
Thanking you
Yours Truly
Navjot Singh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-03-11 | navjot jammu | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...th in the morning as well as in evening also. Firstly, few days I am observing s...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r condition of bus is also deteriorating . In the similar citing, no proper labell...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...es in short period. I will look forward to hear your response in the form of improved s...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and regulations wisely. Thanking you Yours Truly Navjot Singh
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wisely. Thanking you Yours Truly Navjot Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61836212491 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6078760074 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251295926803 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780829848256 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056078783998 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138744808463 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750392934725 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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