Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
while switching a job, many people come to the same crossroads where they have difficulty choosing the right job for them. Some people give utmost priority to they pay while other's think that one should consider the working culture of the company. This essay will explain why it is crucial to consider the working environment, not just money.
To begin with, choosing a job that pays well certainly is important. after all, money is an important factor that determines the lifestyle of a person. If one wants to buy expensive cars and live in a lavish house, they obviously need a lot of money. In that case, it makes all sense to go for a job that pays a high salary. Not only that, the costs of health care and child education is also growing rapidly. considering all these expenses, one definitely should give importance to the remuneration when choosing a job.
that being said, excess money does not necessarily make people happy. A study published in Time magazine found that it is the work-life balance and the working culture that determines a person's happiness, not the pay. though money is useful to pay bills and to meet the needs, after meeting those basic needs, it plays little role in making people happy. Moreover, a person spends a significant amount of their day at the workplace. Thus, it is vital to choose a company that provides a healthy working environment and that makes you feel like home.
In conclusion, though a lot of money is needed to have an extravagant lifestyle, it plays little role in someone's happiness. Hence, in my opinion, one should choose a good working environment that gives enough importance to work-life balance instead of choosing a job solely for money.
- Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 73
- Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for while others think that good working atmosphere is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 36
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, after all, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84353741497 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58466699865 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9720842985 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260584204553 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780156533995 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821010058456 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160927556439 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570004837985 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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