Has the easiness of cooking improved our life?
I'm convinced our cooking style has revolutionary changed in the last few decades. Not only the thousands of recipes have improved, but thousands of absolute new ones have created, too. Of course, the ways of cooking is totally different, improved and our generation is the busiest one ever, that is why often they do have not time to cook at home.
Firstly, as we mentioned that today people do not have time to cook at home, so they eat out every day at different kinds of restaurants and save their time for good, but it does not come without a price. Now thousands of different foods are exist and it lost its quality and healthiness. Now, we call them fast food. Thousands of scientists have proved that the fast food has caused significant problems for million times and people do not live as long life as they used to live in the past centuries. Fast food causes problems like heart disease, headache, gall stone, impotence, high blood pressure, asthma and other types of diseases. The scary one is that, it does not have any vitamins. Even if it causes pretty much trouble, fast food is inescapable part of our society. If you want something fast, cheap and tasty, without any doubt, the best option is fast food.
Secondly, many people still follow the healthy life demands and cook at home. It is true that by cooking at home, you lose your time, but still there are many advantages of cooking at home. Firstly, you will use fresh and clean vegetables, fruits and meat. It is the warranty of healthy meal and your body and stomach never going to face problems with meal. Besides, you will not face problems like heart diseases, high blood pressure and helps to stay at the same weight.
Third but the not last one, the best advantage of fast food is you can always buy the made one, if you do not have enough time to cook. Besides, if you are on travel and you do not have proper equipment to cook, best option is to buy the made one. Most people believe that, if you eat fast food rarely it is not so bad, because one meal at the fast food restaurant has all the calories you needed. For instance, you can find salads and juice on the menu of the fast food restaurants. The more reason that people prefer fast food restaurants, it is always cheaper than other ones.
In the summary, I am totally agreed with the opinion that the fast food is more harmful than healthy, but if we do not eat very much it does not damage our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, for instance, of course, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1373.03311258 146% => OK
No of words: 448.0 270.72406181 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46205357143 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24820005775 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486607142857 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 419.366225166 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1950410309 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8636363636 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138748055433 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461509112475 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671967671029 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927205192835 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682115252597 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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