Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Being famous and renowned,in some people's prospevtive, is equivalent to the success. While some argue that young people need to pursue progamatic puroposes for the future, others assert that being instant celebrities or recognized are the only way for young people to prove themselves. In the progress of globalization, the way to approach and reach the goals have been various and significantly differently from people living in the last century. However, despite of the development of a society, some values and believes are immutable, such as being prescient and viable.
The proponents of the...
- In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. I 65
- Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying. Write a response in which you discuss the ext 75
- The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing."Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulty obtaining reliable supplies of high-quality wool fabric, we discontinued production of 56
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company."According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any 80
- The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice to a client."Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienc 85
Sentence: Being famous and renowned is, in some people's prospevtive, is equivalent to the success.
Error: prospevtive Suggestion: prospective
Sentence: While some argue that young people need to pursue progamatic puroposes for the future, others assert that being instant celebrities or recognized are the only way for young people to prove themselves.
Error: puroposes Suggestion: purposes
Sentence: The TV pop stars, for exemple, are famous among people who like their songs and it is temporary.
Error: exemple Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Although those pop stars achieve the fame and people regonised them, they are far away from truly success.
Error: regonised Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Opposite to the instant fame in tv shows or pop stars, all eminent scientific achievements experience tremendous of experiements and seduluity.
Error: seduluity Suggestion: ?
Error: experiements Suggestion: experiments
Sentence: It reinforced the discovey of universe and bolster the advancement of other modern sicence, such as chemistry and biology, which hugely benefit humans in all areas; It triggered the progress of modernization, which revoluntionized the technology and change the way of communication.
Error: discovey Suggestion: discover
Error: revoluntionized Suggestion: revolutionized
Error: sicence Suggestion: silence
Sentence: All of these which made great contribution to human beings were long-term task and those who were involved in the concoctions remained in the histori and people's memory.
Error: histori Suggestion: history
Sentence: Science iscomplicated; other discinplines might be demanding.
Error: discinplines Suggestion: disciplines
Error: iscomplicated Suggestion: is complicated
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2 (double check spellings)
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 451 350
No. of Characters: 2385 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.608 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.288 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.906 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 171 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 80 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.041 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.479 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5