You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
· An apology
· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you with regret that I am unable to accept the senior developer's position at Xyz Technologies due to the transportation reasons.
As I described in my résumé, I live in Abc village which is 100 kilometers away from your company's main branch and to work over there I have to drive 4 hours a day. Because of my recent knee operation, it is not advisable for me to drive such a long distance. Moreover, there is no local transportation available to consider as my hometown is in a rural area. Therefore, I need to decline the job offer from your company.
Furthermore, I had also applied for the same place in another company Mnz Infotech which is the child firm of your company in my village. Fortunately, I received a similar job offer from that company yesterday and I am willing to accept that as well.
Thanking you for the opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Full name
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- You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:· An apology· An explanation of your situation 73
- With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 67
- Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and your point of view. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67073170732 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90161906844 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9199358974 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159126951522 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697934952251 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646124263803 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114788417266 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694678003012 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.