It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as square and parks. To what extend do you argee or disagree with this statement?
Nowaday, industry is developing fastly. Many cities and towns are grown up, and become very morden. People think all town and cities need to have large public spaces and I agree with them.
Some people say they are not important for a few reasons. In the fist place, they take many spaces. The city is more and more crowed and don’t suply enough place to human life , so need more space to build house, apartment and official for people than build square or parks. Secondly, today little people go to the park. Many entertainment with interesting and attractive games attract people come and visit. A park is forgotten, now is just a place people walking in the morning.
With me, I think it is important for all towns and cicties to have large pulic spaces. Large public spaces bring many benefit . Fistly, they supply clean air, decrease stuffiness. The industry city which is polluted with dust and smoke from factories and speacially vehicles, so they need to build a space grows trees which will supply much oxi, fresh air. Secondly, they are a place which people can relax. After a long tired week, many people come to parks. The young can play game, do more activities like play sport, camping, have a picnic with friend or family, go sightseeing to release stress, and make more new friend. The old can walking, improve their health. Beside that, people often celebrate social events to connect people in the city together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80241935484 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24508351738 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0741819994 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229428823574 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717969746125 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948403064112 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18356112293 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067837566683 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.