You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words
Dear John,
I am so pleased to hear that you would travel around the world in the next month. I hope you could save numerous memories due to beauty scenery.
Anyway, I am writing to inform you that I have moved in a different house that brings me countless wonderful things. Although my old house was purely good but I often got crowded so I decided to exchange to another house near in suburb. Can you imagine the new house? it definitely good with peaceful atmosphere and friendly neighbor. Moreover, I grew many flowers around the house, even I took care of a dog in order that I had a friend. As you know, my old house was far from my work official so I fairly struggle to move. Afterward I move to the new house, I commute easily. In particular, my new house near a market, thus I think this is a chance for me to train cooking ability.
I was wondering if it would be possible for me to invite you to come this house. I would show you the cooking ability by delicious food, even John and I could tell about funny stories.
I have to get back to work now. I am looking forward to receiving your response.
best wishes,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I am so pleased to hear that you would t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd I could tell about funny stories. I have to get back to work now. I am look...
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...ies. I have to get back to work now. I am looking forward to receiving your re...
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Suggestion: Best
... forward to receiving your response. best wishes,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ceiving your response. best wishes,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, i think, in particular, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32242990654 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3776415451 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6867965189 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209267310718 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697922419123 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442622568847 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113406298691 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028950642337 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.