Why do people help each other?
helping people who have starving and making you feel good are the reasons why people help each other.
Firstly, helping people who have starving is tge most significant reasons because unless people help them, they will due because of the fact that they are extreme poverty in order yo be well in their life require to have money and eating. people which find the eating and money can be well and not suffer from starving. The research suggest that people that have money hove to pay it for charities since the number of people that don't have money will be increase provided that people who have money don't help them. And the last statistics said that the rate of income's people who live in starving and poverty area is 0.20$ per day. This amount of money is not enough to live very well and eating. Therefore, government have to be put some role in order to give money for other by people. For instance, the government in US have to get some taxes from its citizens to help other.
Secondly, making you feel good is related by people who help each other as provided that you help other, you will get happiness. The happiness is related by donation since helping otger people increase the number of motivation in their life and will be feel good. The Scientists say that around the world many people require money if you get them it , you will get a lot of motivation and it will be to do again because people who help other get money positive impact.
To sum up, people help each other because of starving and feeling good
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.15609756098 475% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57400722022 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08045874176 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436823104693 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8444137741 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396465595587 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174740226198 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141794019143 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339887591392 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117241860192 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.