Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not
need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, following a vegetarian diet has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend does not appear attractive, the advantages will be more significant.
there are a number of reasons why people should become vegetarian. first, since people have suffered from different chronic illnesses, people tend to consume plant foods. In fact, a healthy vegetarian diet is typically low in fat and high in fiber, which can help people, especially the elderly who are affected by diabetes and obesity avoid absorbing fat nutrients and improve digestion. second, by having a balance diet from a source of organic vegetables, people will have enough supplements to support their bodies. this means that plant foods are rich in vitamins and minerals can provide a wide spectrum of health-promoting nutrients for bodies, which can make the immune system get better.
However, there are still some disadvantages to take into consideration before becoming a vegetarion. first, if people have diet just from the only source of vegetables, there can be a lack of calories to meet people ‘s energy needs if a vegetarian ‘ daily meals are not properly balanced. Consequently, they might feel lethargic and unable to do anything energic. second, in order to change to make meal better taste, people often use various cooking methods. For example, vegetables could be stir fried or boiled in deep water, which leads to a decrease of the amount of vitamins and other minerals absorbed because these supplements are retained best when food is eaten raw or steamed.
In conclusion, the benefits of becoming vegetarian will be far more significant. By following properly balanced diets, people will have enough nutrients to be healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30465949821 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80931341749 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0353720129 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162123068136 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578608442113 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465671284202 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899685211762 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264461887288 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.